Aren't some of the back-of-box claims a little off...? (Weren't there two other handhelds I heard about that offered similar capabilities...?
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I have a couple of suggestions;
Firstly, I would suggest not using JPEG images, or, if you can't avoid that, placing ones that aren't easy to clean white borders from on a white background, not a black one - the Pandora render on the back suffers from this, as does an area a little way away from it, where a white line is wandering around.
Secondly, I would suggest running the text through a spellchecker, and double-checking the placement of punctuation-marks. Pandora is written as "pandara" (lacking both the correct spelling, and the correct capitalisation), and MHz, CPU, and LCD are all in lowercase when they shouldn't be (they're all abbreviations - Mega Hertz, Central Processing Unit, and Liquid Crystal Display), for example, not to mention a few random errors ("coarse" where it should be "course"; "definatly" where it should be "definitely", for example, as well as a lack of capitalisation after full stops).
All of that said, I absolutely adore that pun about opening the packaging - that's brilliant (I'd love to see the team use that one).
(It also sort of sticks out as it has no errors...
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