Saber
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At http://www.pyra-handheld.com/index.html, the text on there needs to be cleaned up a little more. Some further proofreading is needed when time permits:
"One of the most important part is the community - a small company could NEVER provide the manpower for all the software you could possibly need."
Also, focus on what the Pyra will do and not the excuses for any perceived negatives. Specifically, talk only about the vibrant 720p screen instead of the sensible reasons a 1080p display isn't advantageous for a 5"+ screen.
Additionally, advertising DS and PSP emulation openly on the homepage should probably be nixed.
"One of the most important part is the community - a small company could NEVER provide the manpower for all the software you could possibly need."
Also, focus on what the Pyra will do and not the excuses for any perceived negatives. Specifically, talk only about the vibrant 720p screen instead of the sensible reasons a 1080p display isn't advantageous for a 5"+ screen.
Additionally, advertising DS and PSP emulation openly on the homepage should probably be nixed.
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