A couple of new comments:
On the go entertainment and productivity
With Android in the mix you can use Netflix and iPlayer on the Pandora alongside a variety of video and music apps in both Linux and Android.
But don't just consume content, create it! With the Pandora 1GHz you can take advantage of office suites, development tools, music sequencers, note managers, educational software and more to create and learn. Full C/C++ development tools enable on-device compilation, letting you literally write and compile your own games and software on the go.
It does not even mention the main OS of the device, Angstrom. It is the MAIN system of the device, so why Android gets the first mention ?
iPlayer only works in the UK, that should be mentioned, too.
From on the go productivity to gaming in moments
Sitting side-by-side, the full QWERTY keyboard and gaming controls offer the best of both worlds, be it business or pleasure. When you're not gaming, the analogue nubs make an excellent stand-in for a nipple-mouse and are much easier to use over long periods of time than the touch screen.
When you are gaming, the analogue gives you familiar games-console-like control over your 3D games, and the enthusiast-tweaked digital pad and face buttons are amongst the best of their kind.
There is no mention about the number of buttons for gaming, i.e. no mention of the shoulder buttons. That is useful information to clarify that there is full emulation of most controllers for the systems mentioned.
With over 50 free emulators currently available, the emulation potential of the Pandora is mind blowing.
Relive your favourite games on retro computers like the Atari and C64, through 8bit and 16bit consoles like the NES, SNES, Master System and Megadrive and culminating at N64, Playstation 1, Gameboy Advance and Pentium-era PC. The selection of games opened up is immense, and you'll be raiding the loft for your classic cartridges.
If you mention the Master System, the Amiga should be mentioned because it was clearly the most popular 16 bit computer in the end 80s and 90s. N64 does not work full speed for many games, should it even be mentioned so prominently? Mentioning the PC-ENgine / Supergraphx would be more appropriate since that one work at full speed.
We know movies, music and games chew through disk space, so we didn't put any fixed storage inside the Pandora. Instead, dual SD card slots mean you can double up on the storage and are future-proof up to a possible 4 terabytes of storage at the theoretical 2TB maximum capacity of SDXC cards.
Are you sure there is software/firmware support for up to 2Tb cards ?? This seems like an overly optimistic marketing claim, again.
The full-sized USB host port will let you use USB hard-drives, 3G adaptors and many more USB low-power peripherals.
This sounds like a half-lie since you do not mention this is a USB 2.0 only port, and many of the low-power peripherals like mice and keyboards are still in 1.1 USB. Limitations should be mentioned.
Lightweight custom linux OS or Android
Choose from a quick-launch, ultra minimalist OS, a fully-featured XFCE desktop environment with window management, multi-tasking and everything you would expect from a full linux laptop.
Need Android? No problem, the Pandora can run Android too - from within the XFCE desktop.
What version of Android? It's not like Android is a unique system. And it's not "no problem" there are many limitations and actually the main build from notaz is not based on Android but Cyanogenmod. This is not exactly the same thing.
Seriously, if you had a lawyer review this, there would be about a number of ways an angry user could use this page against you to sue
What you write on a page where you sell the device
has to be EXACTLY true. If not, this can be turned against you.