It looks nice. Some comments:
- on FF 14 the screenshots are not in the right position/rotation (was already reported above)
- no-click interface is cool, but a bit confusing, and I had to search how to go back to the intro screen (and I had to click for that)
- site is too wide to fit the Pandora screen
- I see a thin white horizontal line at the bottom (where the footer starts), should probably not be there
- "Open Linux OS" is bad terminology imo (see for more about this). Instead of "Lightweight, very fast, Open Linux OS" I would say "Full GNU/Linux OS with great community"
- maybe add what speed it can overclock to reliably?
- most of the native games are not freeware (i.e. public domain) but Free Software, there is a difference
- "Native port" sounds strange to me: if it's native, it is not a port. Some things run in emulators, some things are ported (e.g. Quake), some things are native Pandora projects (e.g. Super Geometry Dust and many other things in the PND store)
- 10 hours with display at max brightness, wifi on and playing movies is not realistic. 6-7 hours would be a better estimate. Also, standby time is not very relevant imo (this is not a phone). With the display at min brightness (which is how I prefer to use it when not in daylight), with mild cpu usage (e.g. light web browsing or doing office stuff), you can easily get 15 hours or so. When just playing music (lid closed), you can get something like 24 hours or so.