Chip
...Maybe a little too retro-trendy ... I can't make any promises about adoption as a default, but I don't see any reason why the retail-ready distro can't include several wallpaper options. I think this could easily be one of them.
Thanks for the critique Chip. I completely agree with you; the design is bordering cliché trendy. I'm hoping that I can push to be something even more unique.
Having my work included with the Pandora would be an honor. In time, maybe I or anybody will have an identity package that the community supports and betters the broader perception of the Pandora.
Gruso
I really hope you stay involved and stay persistent, traylorpark. I'd love to see your work officially adopted, whether it's for ads, box art or just wallpaper.
It's hands down the best Pandora art I've seen yet. Hearts and all.
Thanks very much Gruso! Thank you for the increased exposure from the community blog. Seeing that come up in my Google feed reader was quite a surprise.
To cappuchok
Thanks for the critique. I am still wrestling with the chosen rainbow colors. I tend to prefer muted tones over saturated, but I should forgo my knee-jerk bias and explore other possibilities.
My argument for having these abstracted colors for the rainbow, is that I want it to reference the old computers and consoles without being too literal and obvious. The Pandora is its own console now, in a wholly new era and context.
Less hearts... agreed. Will remedy. I probably will not "lose" all of them, but a reduction would be helpful. I'm going to try replacing them with other details.
Tobs
Wow! You continue to amaze me; I would buy the Pandora based on the box alone ^^
I might have to play around with this...
Haha, want the blend? The texture for the Japanese apartment is coming, I PROMISE! After that, I want to create assets that specifically benefit your level editor (and have a shorter turn around time). I'm so sick of this one giant scene deal I got myself into.
to EdCa22
For that comment, I owe you a beer.
adamorjames
...I think I may do something... anyways looks interesting.
Would you like to know the specific colors and typefaces I am using? That is of course, if you wanted to work on designs with a similar look.
(naw)mcx
This is gay.
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traylorpark's is not.
You put a lot of time into that piece, didn't you. I like the rainbow :wub:
Thanks everyone for your input! Your compliments AND critiques are very encouraging. However, I am surprised by many people getting negatively hung up on the "gay" aspect. Being a community that celebrates how open it is, I would hope that being "open" would also carry into being open minded. Dealing with the specifics, there are good arguments against the liberal use of heart shape, and I agree. However, I am in agreement not because of how they might appear homosexual.
The average tone of all the responses seems to equal something like, "positive, excited about direction, be wary of the trendy look, more revision necessary" and I COMPLETELY feel the same way.
I'm excited to keep working on this and to continue receiving constructive criticism.
I'm also interested in other peoples thoughts on creating a aesthetically enticing, cohesive identity package for the Pandora. My last post talked up the argument a bit more. I think it would be very beneficial. Agree? How would such an identity be displayed in the world (outside this forum)?
For the curious, its probably going to take a couple days to post any new art. Lots of other stuff to get done.