Halloween
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By removing Earth from the story it could be set in space...with a bunch of dead people.
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rygD
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So, what, you threw out the last couple parts?
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Yeah, how mean!Don't you think about our feelings, Shenmue?
Did our lord and savior Son Goku die for NOTHING?
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A friendly young lady wearing a dark maid uniform slowly approached, her smiling face and hazel eyes seemed to shine in the dark like a silver white brooch.
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"Come in, my dear," she said in an delicate and chilling voice. "I have a special treat for you within my mansion."
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"What kind of a treat?" Stephen asked suspiciously.
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Sorry guys if that came off as weird. I was meaning for the old lady to trick the boy into getting trapped in her haunted mansion of scares. Maybe it wasn't the best piece of dialogue to use. :/
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"The biggest pile of sweets you ever saw in your life" said the maid.
"Seems legit" thought Stephen, who then proceeded to enter the mansion.
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Hey! It's supposed to be scary (if you know what I mean)
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Looks like Miku and I are going to have to carry on this story ourselves. :rolleyes:
It'll be good practice for the story that we're supposed to be writing + it's a bit of harmless fun, which I've always been fond of.
It'll be good practice for the story that we're supposed to be writing + it's a bit of harmless fun, which I've always been fond of.
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sorry guys, I thought I was following this conversation but I guess I wasn't. Let me add to the story:
As Stephen entered the Mansion, the door slammed behind him and the old woman faded like a cloud of steam separating into the air.
As Stephen entered the Mansion, the door slammed behind him and the old woman faded like a cloud of steam separating into the air.
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Stephen took an involuntary jump backwards, then he spun round and frantically tried to open the door... It was locked.
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"Aw, crap!" Stephen said, irritated. "Now I have to explore this entire mansion, looking for the key, just like another lame episode out of Scooby-doo!"
But where to begin his search? He turned around and decided to head down the heavily cobwebbed corridor..
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A piercing scream echoed in the distance. "I don't fancy checking that out" thought Stephen.
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