Yeah I get the calligraphy pen style, but if I'm honest I don't actually know the correct use of them, as in when you should tilt the pen or not
I do love calligraphy though, should really practice it myself.
So on that type, the pen nib is horizontal throughout, apart from those 2 line strokes, where the pen nib is tilted 45 degree anti-clockwise...
...But I didn't know that was the correct way of doing it, which is why I guess I should learn it.
[i gave up on fountain pens early on in school and used biro, the nibs on fountain pens scratching on paper had a nails-on-blackboard effect on me]
Still, having seen purplegoats examples, I do prefer the original one still.
As I suspected, the balance looks wrong when the ending line is not a thick line