- Nov 18, 2008
that's ok, but the background info is not going to be read (if at all) if editors do not think there is an interesting story in it, and that you have to provide yourself!!Thanks for the idea. It's a good start for sending the news to the press!
I don't want to include that into the PressKit, as a PressKit should be neutral in my opinion, but sending out a bit more marketing-texts like this one via mail to newssites, including a link to the PressKit for more informaitons, is a good idea.
It's a bit too much for me, but I will use it as basis to create some similar text.
In any case, just commenting on the english quick info: it does not anywhere answer the basic question: "What is the Dragonbox Pyra?" The reader may deduce (finally somewhere after the fourth paragraph) that it is some kind of mobile device, apparently perfect for work and play on the go or at home..so a fancy model of electric toothbrush?
what makes you think we aren't??Why are all of you in here posting instead of standing on corners telling people to order a Pyra?