The Pyra-Logo

[fantomid]

last versions in French and English

French 1 line



French 2 lines



English 1 line



English 2 lines



Prefer versions on one line

 

[levi]

Agreed, having the line span the space on the left means less wasted space and actually makes the text look less compressed because there's only two lines in the space under the logo rather than three.


Looking pretty professional now, nice work!

 

[Fzero]

Yep, one line looks much nicer, the spacing looks better too.

Just one thing, the French one, the text runs right to the very edge [unless that grey area is like a bleeding area or something?] ... I don't think you'd want the text reaching the very edge of the card eh, leave a little gap, like shown on the English one.

Also, one more thing [/Columbo], perhaps align the left most side of 'dragonbox' with the left most side of 'Pyra' ... so move the dragonbox text over to the right a little bit

 

[Askarus]

DragonBox​

Pyra​

I actually prefer this.

Good one.

Simple and easy readable letters.