gibberish said:
its by far my favourite, but i think its a bit messy.
i mean the way the guy scrolls off the screen twice, its not very easy on the eyes.
imo he should just get caught by the box as he lets go of the ground.
I have to agree with this as well. The pixel guy should probably stay in the center of the screen as he tumbles into the box. Just have the background moving to the left and maybe catch up to the penguin and take a glance and him going the other way
Just ideas.
I also think you should throw more consoles in there. Just my opinion though.
Also, only the sprite-boy and box have a shadow, everything else has no shadow?
I still think that more consoles would make the video too crowded ...
But yeah , if the developpers likes it i would definitively add shadows to every console.
And for the pandora dude going left to right , i tried following him with the camera and it looked a bit messy , i could still give another try but i still think its a mather of What you are focusing on , if you focus on the background objects its hars to follow but if you actually focus on the pandora dude its okay.
Still , i might give it a shot again
Thanks for all the great feedbacks!