(characters name)- main character
(other characters name)- other characters that are on main character side (supporting character)
I was going for that reveal a little of the end and start the story vibe thing.
…rumble….flash….destruction…. “Leave why you still can save your-self”…..
“I cant do that you know I cant, I love you (characters name)”….. “Please go leave me, goodbye (characters name), Go back to the ship they will bring you back home, hurry”…. “I’d rather die, than to leave you” ….. “You cant die……………………
“Wake up, you must not be late, you looked as if you hadn’t sleep” said mother “I’m sorry I couldn’t fall asleep, I was up all night thinking about it” (characters name). “Its your 17th birthday, today is the day you leave with the other 17 year old males of this Island to go beyond Kalamare and explore what’s beyond your home” said mother, “I know you’ve said it many times over the years, every year the current 17 year olds leave to explore the world beyond Kalamare” said (characters name). “ It just, I don’t want to leave you here all alone” said (characters name). “I’ll be fine you know that” said mother, “Before dad died he told me to take care of you” said (characters name), “I know he would want you to leave like the rest, he would be proud of you and how you matured into a fine young man, now come closer” said mother. “Never forget one thing my son, always rely on you heart and head, now leave before you miss the boat” said mother and hugged (characters name) “Goodbye mother” said (characters name). Walks out with his sword and stuff, “Hey hold on (characters name), wait up” said (other characters name), “hey (other characters name), are you exited” said (characters name). “Well to be honest I’m scared as hell” said (other characters name), “Why” said (characters name) “because I heard that rarely people make it out alive down there” (other characters name).At boat area “are you all ready” said castkell (boat driver) , “Ha iv been ready unlike these pussy’s” said Ricardo (or who ever this is only the first draft of the first segment). “We’ll see how ready ye are, not many survive the trip, personally I hope you get slayed by one of the many creatures in the world” said castkell. “It funny how an old senia..” said recardo interrupted by (other characters name) “ shut your fucking mouth Ricardo, before I kill you myself” Ricardo rushed at him, Slice. “I don’t believe it you cut me you bastard im gonna die” said Ricardo as he fainted , “ haha he’ll be alright he just cut his arm” said (characters name), “Who’s the pussy now” said one of the other boys. Sailing hour later “good bye” said castkell as he jumped of the ship, “don’t worry this is one of our test..arrsgjg” said on boy after stoping and not moving. “are you okay, oh my god what the fuck is going on”said one boy as the other boys body fell into two pieces, “ I don’t believe this is happening” (characters name).
More to come I’m already planed that only (characters name) and (other characters name) survive the trip, then get to a town and part, this is were the real story starts, ill write more as soon as I can.