I can see some potential, but I do have some constructive criticisms, here;
1: I can see what you were going for with the "
Pandora Open." thing, but it may work better as a visual pun - perhaps have the first of those two photographs captioned with "
Pandora...", and the one with the device open and surrounded by its included parts with "
Open."?
2: There are some problems with the usage of capital letters, particularly on the predominantly red-on-yellow leaflet. I also think that it could be made a little more concise, and laid out in a slightly more dynamic fashion - such as using different shapes to contain different parts of the text, and making some of them smaller than others. Remember, a leaflet is something that only has a limited amount of time to make an impact. I've written up my take on it, below;
What is the Pandora?
A pocket-sized Linux PC and games console in one!
Perhaps a small circle, starburst, or similar could contain the text about what it can run, which I've chopped about a bit, here, so as to avoid being specific, but to spark the imagination.
Pandora is capable of emulating a variety of systems, and playing open source games!
All of your classic console, computer, and arcade favourites are possible - and more besides! You can even code your own!
The next part, I've changed a little, as these are more features, rather than technical specifications. Moreover, I've dropped a couple of lines, and expanded on some others;
Features
- No Restrictions: Pandora is an open system, able to be used as you wish
- Made for Linux: Run the included Linux-based operating system from the built-in internal memory, or boot other, optional operating systems from a standard SD Card
- Controls for Every Occasion: Pandora features digital gaming controls, two analogue nubs, and a 43-key QWERTY keypad
- All the Versatility you Need: Play games, write and compile code, play music and movies, browse the web, or even author your next masterpiece - anywhere
- Room to Expand: Pandora offers plenty of storage space by means of two SD Card slots, which support cards of up to 32GB each
- Pocket Sized: Sized at just 8.3cm by 14cm, Pandora's power is packed into a machine approximately the size of the market-leading commercial handheld game consoles
- Community Driven: With a community of enthusiastic Pandora fans from around the world, you have access to 24/7 Pandora discussion, tips, help, and chat - and new software and games are emerging from the community all the time!
- Play for Longer: With an average battery life of ten or more hours of actual usage time, Pandora can outlast most other currently-available gadgets
Last of all, the closing text needed to be a bit more encouraging, so here's my take on that;
Join the community and pre-order now at www.openpandora.org!
I think that this comes across as more of a call for the reader to jump in and join us!
Last of all, perhaps a QR Code wouldn't go amiss? Since quite a lot of people carry devices that can use QR Codes to take them straight to websites, these days, something like that would make the difference between the leaflet being put away to be referred to later (and probably forgotten in the process), and scanning right then and there to see what it's all about. Here's an example of one, which points to
http://www.openpandora.org ;
I hope that this is helpful in some way - I think that overall, it should give the leaflet a more enthusiastic and punchy tone, this way.
